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| Creative Writing Thread, Poem in Other Forums; I have closed into myself like a flower when the sun goes down. Or a sea anemone when it's been ... |
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12-12-2008, 06:55 PM
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| Poem I have closed into myself like a flower when the sun goes down. Or a sea anemone when it's been touched. I'm sitting in a corner staying alive, as I watch the world flutter by. I'd rather be sleeping. You speak to me and I force a few words before slipping away. I have nothing to say.  |
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12-13-2008, 06:49 AM
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| Re: Poem Should i be concerned for the poet or is it his licence ? If he makes me feel cold should i worry? The image he portrays requires me to ask ..are you OK friend? |
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