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| Three new poems. Completeness Persuaded they were of searching, Their completion in order to find, But they should not at all mind, For completed from birth is mankind. Fearless All strange things used to fill them with fear, But all they needed was bringing them near, For what they had only to see, How familiar the strangest of things can really be. Time Creation and decay, Have showed them the way, To what does not fade away, To the one and the whole that is complete, That all seen or unseen is part of it.
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| Re: Three new poems. fun! but if I could offer some advice change ' How familiar the strangest of things can really be.' into 'How familiar the strangest of things really can be' It has a better rythm that way. |
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| Three new poems. Anxious Antithesis is not creative, a Novelty is not made by Xerox, to Improvise is everything not meant to be Official, is only an Unwonted Stroke Isolation Irresolute of how to obtain Safety, is an Orgasm of Liberty, than the Authority of Time, Intelligent is not Other than Natural Obstruct Obtain only what enables to Breathe, taking up the Slack, every Test, gives a mind Reflex, to Understand, the Cycle of Thinking
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